writing ritual – music

Writing routine. Writing ritual. I like the term writing ritual. Then the term is spiritual. Religious, even.

Over the course of writing The Emergent, I listened to certain albums for their familiar sounds and their contribution to my writing ritual. I wrote about it in this post.

On that note, I wanted to share the only playlist I listened to in the final six months of work on the book. Never listened out of order. The list is publicly available or you can recreate it on a different platform.

I wish I had 3 hours+ to write every session.

Lessons from a Tick

I would rather have lyme disease than admit this, but here goes: I have a tick.

After nearly two decades of working on The Emergent, you would think I had cured all the sentence-level “ticks.” Well, I have…now. A real buzzer-beater. Some serious Steph Curry magic. As I made my last pass of the manuscript last week, I discovered the tick. From now until publication, anything other than typo corrections is frowned upon.

What the heck is a “tick” for a writer? Generally, it’s a bad/clumsy habit in a person’s prose. For me, it was starting a sentence or a phrase with “there was” or “there were.” I discovered nearly 40 instances, made improvements to nearly all of them, and straight up deleted others. Here are some examples vs their re-writes:

There were reassuring whispers. When they stopped, I went searching for them.

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The reassuring whispers stopped. And I went searching for them.

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There was a question in her voice as she trailed off.

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A question tinged her voice as she trailed off.

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There were other stories that were just downright weird for Oso to be telling me.

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Other stories were just downright weird for Oso to tell.

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There was something changing in her that was somehow connected to the obligations she assumed.

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Something was changing in her that was somehow connected to the obligations she assumed.

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But there were two times that she changed the tradition.

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She changed the tradition only two times.

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When we arrived, the sun was out and there was no wind.

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When we arrived, the sun was out and the air was still.

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When we arrived, the sun was out and the air was still.

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But there is rage and dissatisfaction in their music; it helps give me some idea of where the discontent of men comes from.

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But their rage and dissatisfaction helps give me some idea of where the discontent of men comes from.